Now things get nasty.

[auronlu]

New chapter up. My muse is still being a bitch about polished phrasing, but the content should give readers something to chew on.

New chapter: Costly Secrets

Summary:

"You see, they envy the living. And in time, that envy turns to anger, even hate. Should these souls remain in Spira, they become fiends that prey on the living." ~ Lulu
Sometimes, it's not just fiends one has to worry about.


I had originally pitched a slightly tamer version of this idea to fyre_bird, but she convinced me not to beat around the bush.

[[EDIT 2/24 11PM:

Bah, this is getting to be a very bad habit! I just played the game for an hour, got their voices a little more anchored in my head, and thoroughly rewrote the chapter to make the words flow better. No change in content, just cosmetics. ]]

Comments

[akycha.livejournal.com]

You asked me to check-- I was able to get to this chapter and to the earlier one (labeled "smut!" just like Tom Lehrer's songs) without having to register or click anything. So, now you know!

[auronlu.livejournal.com]

Uh oh. Well THAT's no good, now is it? Guess I'd better stop direct-linking and send in a bug report. Thanks my dear!