Now things get nasty.
Mar. 23rd, 2006 08:45 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
auronluNew chapter up. My muse is still being a bitch about polished phrasing, but the content should give readers something to chew on.
New chapter: Costly Secrets
Summary:
"You see, they envy the living. And in time, that envy turns to anger, even hate. Should these souls remain in Spira, they become fiends that prey on the living." ~ Lulu
Sometimes, it's not just fiends one has to worry about.
I had originally pitched a slightly tamer version of this idea to fyre_bird, but she convinced me not to beat around the bush.
[[EDIT 2/24 11PM:
Bah, this is getting to be a very bad habit! I just played the game for an hour, got their voices a little more anchored in my head, and thoroughly rewrote the chapter to make the words flow better. No change in content, just cosmetics. ]]
New chapter: Costly Secrets
Summary:
"You see, they envy the living. And in time, that envy turns to anger, even hate. Should these souls remain in Spira, they become fiends that prey on the living." ~ Lulu
Sometimes, it's not just fiends one has to worry about.
I had originally pitched a slightly tamer version of this idea to fyre_bird, but she convinced me not to beat around the bush.
[[EDIT 2/24 11PM:
Bah, this is getting to be a very bad habit! I just played the game for an hour, got their voices a little more anchored in my head, and thoroughly rewrote the chapter to make the words flow better. No change in content, just cosmetics. ]]
