Wow I can see why that intricate illustration was giving you trouble for so long! (Thank you for not asking me to do this one haha.)
I like the slow, subtle buildup to the reveal of Shuyin, in the gradual details that something is amiss - his anger jumping from person to person, Elma's slip of the tongue in mentioning Lenne instead of Lucil, Auron's pyreflies reacting to the presence of another unsent. It's a very effective way of building tension and suspense.
Also I have a feeling Rikku could have been 35 when she got married and Cid still would have thought it was too young. ;)
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Date: 2019-04-22 03:20 pm (UTC)I like the slow, subtle buildup to the reveal of Shuyin, in the gradual details that something is amiss - his anger jumping from person to person, Elma's slip of the tongue in mentioning Lenne instead of Lucil, Auron's pyreflies reacting to the presence of another unsent. It's a very effective way of building tension and suspense.
Also I have a feeling Rikku could have been 35 when she got married and Cid still would have thought it was too young. ;)