Random question to the people who read my stuff

[auronlu]

Are my paragraphs too short?

Since I compose in 18 point type, my paragraphs look long enough to me. But when I look at them on a large display, I see a lot of short choppy paragraphs. I feel like typical paragraph lengths in fic have shortened over my lifetime, but I'm not sure.

Here's the kind of thing I worry about.

Comments

[cumuluscastle]

They may look shorter than the average paragraph, but nothing about them bothers me.

[lassarina]

They don't bother me (I am more likely to be put off by wall-o-text that takes up more than my phone screen.)

[auronlu]

Thanks, both of you. That reassures me I'm not losing people with Basically a TV Script style scenes.