Rikku's little pop grenades are so useful.... when a scene bogs down, boom, moving right along!
Only trouble is, now I've got 15 extra warrior monks waking up at about the same time as Baralai and Paine. I need to drop them down a manhole or something. They got in the way horribly; I wanted to get Baralai and Gippal and Paine all aiming weapons at each other, but I couldn't explain NO defenses waiting for the airship, nor could I get Gippal's gun out without 15 warrior monks shooting holes in him. Ah well, can't do a dramatic mirror of everything in both games, or it would get boring.
Baralai has got to be a very paranoid person, despite years of working with decent people.
Phew, I'm starting to get the hang of writing more than 3 characters in a scene. I fall back on dialog, yes indeed. (I also played every last bit of those Crimson Squad videos you gave me the link for before each writing session, while doing dishes or chores. I have the whole batch on my HD. They help me "set" everyone's voices in my head.)
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Date: 2009-06-25 03:18 am (UTC)Rikku's little pop grenades are so useful.... when a scene bogs down, boom, moving right along!
Only trouble is, now I've got 15 extra warrior monks waking up at about the same time as Baralai and Paine. I need to drop them down a manhole or something. They got in the way horribly; I wanted to get Baralai and Gippal and Paine all aiming weapons at each other, but I couldn't explain NO defenses waiting for the airship, nor could I get Gippal's gun out without 15 warrior monks shooting holes in him. Ah well, can't do a dramatic mirror of everything in both games, or it would get boring.
Baralai has got to be a very paranoid person, despite years of working with decent people.
Phew, I'm starting to get the hang of writing more than 3 characters in a scene. I fall back on dialog, yes indeed. (I also played every last bit of those Crimson Squad videos you gave me the link for before each writing session, while doing dishes or chores. I have the whole batch on my HD. They help me "set" everyone's voices in my head.)