You're right, and I probably should take out the references to Kulukan (one of the blitz players you can hire for the Besaid Aurochs) since her identity isn't relevant and she doesn't stick around long enough to be someone -- whereas Kiryuu actually plays a minor part in the story.
And yay, great critique/feedback -- I feel like I've been given two surprise yummy batches of fresh-baked brownies this weekend!
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Date: 2008-07-14 06:44 am (UTC)And yay, great critique/feedback -- I feel like I've been given two surprise yummy batches of fresh-baked brownies this weekend!