Resurrection III ~ rough draft?

Never do this: post a fic before one has gone over it a half-dozen times and polished it to a burnished shine.

Chapter 1 and 2 posted (PG so far, although the later chapters won't be): Resurrection III: Stolen Fayth

*pokes at pacing fitfully*

[edit: Ah, that's better. A little bit of smoothing in chapter 2.]