This is an impressive multi-character scene -- everybody sounds precisely like themselves, even the characters with less of a voice in the original series. There's nothing clunky or sloggy about this -- the narrative keeps up, much is revealed, and the characters are slowly catching up, while Lulu's practically flailing and hopping around.
I like how neatly this bookends the original Machina war -- another experimental weapon, the destruction of the Fayth rather than the creation of them. Very tidy. Polished.
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Date: 2009-11-01 03:43 am (UTC)This is an impressive multi-character scene -- everybody sounds precisely like themselves, even the characters with less of a voice in the original series. There's nothing clunky or sloggy about this -- the narrative keeps up, much is revealed, and the characters are slowly catching up, while Lulu's practically flailing and hopping around.
I like how neatly this bookends the original Machina war -- another experimental weapon, the destruction of the Fayth rather than the creation of them. Very tidy. Polished.
Yay!