I feel silly that I'd forgotten I started with an introduction from Auron's point of view, thanks Muggy!
What I need to do now is sit down and reread from start to finish, paying attention to the critique and feedback I've gotten so far. I think that by finding my own answers to the questions and concerns some of my reviewers have raised, I may generate some very interesting material to use. It may also help me be careful. To a large extent, I write on instinct and let characters steer things. But sometimes I run into dangerous waters, skirting the edge of that "wish fulfillment" problem that muggy raised.
Besides, reviewers deserve that much. Some of you have been so very generous! :)
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Date: 2006-04-26 04:50 am (UTC)What I need to do now is sit down and reread from start to finish, paying attention to the critique and feedback I've gotten so far. I think that by finding my own answers to the questions and concerns some of my reviewers have raised, I may generate some very interesting material to use. It may also help me be careful. To a large extent, I write on instinct and let characters steer things. But sometimes I run into dangerous waters, skirting the edge of that "wish fulfillment" problem that muggy raised.
Besides, reviewers deserve that much. Some of you have been so very generous! :)