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Title: Love Her and Despair
Chapter 26: "On the Brink"
Final Fantasy X/X-2
Characters: Auron, Elma
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2400
Summary: Gratuitous plot break for angst, recap and character study. Betcha no one's written a scene between these two before!
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Our Story So Far: Isaaru's party has learned about the lies of the Church of Yevon, of the Final Summoning, of Operation Mi'ihen, and of the ancient war between Zanarkand and Bevelle. A doomsday weapon from that ancient war may be the tool they need to fight Sin— if Cid, possessed by a vengeful ghost, doesn't seize it and turn it against Bevelle.

The airship soared on through the night sky. There was no sign of Sin, save a thin stripe of corded cloud marching off towards Macalania. The flight deck had emptied two hours ago, after Shinra reprogrammed the autopilot to track their quarry. Now the running lights had dimmed, leaving no visible barrier between its sole occupant and the endless sweep of stars. Sir Auron sat motionless with his back against cold glass, keeping vigil with only his jug of nog for company.

He had spent many such nights on Mt. Gagazet, gazing out across a black abyss just a step beyond the edge of a precipice. Even in Zanarkand, where depth was an illusion and city lights masked the stars, he had found solace on the heights. There, the unsettling tug of the Farplane was ever-present, save when subsumed by ordinary vertigo. It was like fasting: deny simple cravings (step off, the pyreflies would sing; your life is void; run, leap, and go!) and stronger urges could be denied.

Somewhere beyond sight, Lulu (who had been another precipice) was flying blind in a cavernous belly of bone and rot and darkness. Could the Lady see stars from her vile cocoon?

This was the watch they had once shared, the chill midnight hours, guarding younger guardians with a bleak sense of destiny on their shoulders. On most nights, they had barely exchanged a word. Yet there had been a texture and a weight to that silence as solid as a sword's grip.

Until the witch-woman who seemed almost colorless had changed the color of silence itself. Drawn by his difference, she had made an alluring offer. He, to his own surprise, had stepped off. There was something about Lulu's challenge (and not only the enticements of Venus, for he had been propositioned before) that tickled his sense of irony. A woman who meant to die with her summoner, and a man who already knew what death meant: they were the last people who should be trifling with life's distractions. Yet there was a bittersweet pleasure in cheating death for a little while, as she had promised.

They had observed strict rules of engagement, of course: never on duty, and never unless their summoner was somewhere safe, such as an inn with a Ronso guarding the door. Which meant, for the remainder of the pilgrimage, their silent watches had become an agreeable form of fasting.

The game had nearly been given away when that old coot at the Monster Arena handed over the Mars Sigil. Rikku had snatched it and the Venus Crest from the mage's hair to demonstrate: "Hey, lookit, they fit together!"

"Whoa-ho," Tidus said. "Hey, Auron—"

Auron's brusque give me that had triggered a half-hour sulk from the Al Bhed girl, but he had been trying not to laugh. The prim look on the mage's face had been worth the aggravation of the sigil-quest.

Lulu had caught the glint in his eye, and had spent the rest of the day tormenting him during combat with blatant flirting under the guise of sending fiends to death's loving arms. "Hope you like it hot..." she would purr, scorching a malboro to a husk of withered leaves. Or, "Thirsty?" while quenching the raging fires of a chimera. It was a game she played, and a silly game at that, but it had helped keep him sane.

Yes, Rikku. I miss her.

He allowed himself to admit it now, having escorted Rikku to a cabin an hour ago. She had gone without protest, not like the old days, jesting that she'd herded enough cactuars to bed to know better.

"Although I doubt I'll sleep much." Rikku draped bonelessly against the doorframe, shadows under her eyes as she flashed a smile borrowed from her cousin. "Really, Auron, it's amazing how trouble follows you around like a bit of toilet paper stuck to your boot."

"Rikku. We'll find your fa—"

"Don't say it." She stuck out her tongue, but the words were too quick and sharp for teasing. "No more promises, 'kay? Alhough I guess you never gave Tidus any promises."

The door cut the space between them while he was still seeking a retort, or adequate words for atonement.

Isaaru had retired earlier, too. Something was wrong with the man. Auron was hardly in the mood for summoner's games, but he would need to find out what ailed him before they faced Sin. Most likely, Isaaru was suffering from the effects of Sin's attacks on the temples. A part of his soul had been wrested away with every aeon's loss. It was a strain with which Auron could empathize.

Sleep sharpens swords. Any soldier past cadet knew the wisdom of that proverb. Yet here Auron was, staying up late with a jug of nog at his knee, sailing through memories to stave off sleep. Would he remember to wake up again? What fee would dreams charge for another day of existence?

Pyreflies danced at the edges of his vision, seeping away when his attention wandered. There were bone-aches in his flesh, bones that throbbed like torn muscle, ghosts of every wound he had ever sustained— before or after death, he could no longer tell. Nor could he remember whether the ale on his lips came from this side of the Farplane.

Lulu was not the only one "running out of ice cream."


Auron set the jug down and pushed it away. Despair made the whine of the pyreflies louder, audible above the ship's engines. It was time to focus.

The next stage of the pilgrimage was clear enough. Fight Cid. Banish Shuyin. Keep away from Isaaru, whose sendings had been giving him headaches. Reach the next treasure chest. The weapon inside would prove useful against their next foe. (Lulu in that irrevocable moment of despair, sheathed in ice and metal and a tree of lightning six hundred feet high, towering over a Yuna-sized shadow painted onto scorched bedrock.)

No. Don't think of that. Keep moving forward. Keep alert for the next opening. There would not be many more.

Using Vegnagun was risky, but Auron had almost given up trying to save the world. He'd settle for satisfying one damned oath before the pyreflies won.

Approaching footsteps yanked him back to the here and now. Minute safety lights embedded in the floor powered up. The aft doors whisked open. A wiry figure stepped out. It was not Rikku, as he thought for a moment, but the Crusader woman still dressed in Al Bhed garb, silhouetted against amber light spilling out from the corridor. He shielded his eyes with his glove until the doors closed.

Elma halted, waiting for her eyes to adjust. There was a sag in her stance that he had not seen before, not even after the first Operation Mi'ihen. He heard the release of a held breath.

Then she caught sight of him. "Oh! My apologies, sir!" She straightened at once, squaring her shoulders to parade attention. "I can go, if—"

"It's fine." He gestured to the floor next to him, a silent challenge. "Sit."

"Er...thank you, sir." She hesitated at the joint between metal deckplates and textured glass. Tiny pinpricks of blue were the only sign that she was not stepping out over a void. "I still don't know whether to atone or beg for a tour of duty as Al Bhed liaison. This ship..." She shook her head and forced herself to walk towards him. "I wonder what the general would think."

When she slid down the wall and pulled her knees into her chest, Auron pushed the jug towards her.

"Heh. That obvious, eh?" She grinned and leaned over to take the offering. "You know, I was starting to think this was just for show. Lady Rikku said you never had much use for R&R."

"Not much time."

"Yeah." Elma sobered, swirling the jug lightly. "Next Calm, maybe?"

Auron shrugged. "Maybe." Whatever the Farplane was really like, he was certain Yevon's paradise of wildflowers and waterfalls was a lie.

"Maybe," Elma agreed with a sigh. "Gotta admit, I'm not in the mood for blitzball myself right now." She lifted the jug to the sky, composed herself, and began a rhythmic chant that petered out all too soon. "Luzzu. Kyou. Kento. Velitz. And... whoever the hell else we've lost." Anger capped the prayer instead of the customary Yevon guide them. She tossed the brew back. Then she was gasping, laughing as her eyes teared up. "Whoa! Kulukan's ale. I'd almost forgotten the stuff, since shipments got scarce."

Silence fell. Auron supposed the woman was trying to figure out how to pose the question that was gnawing at her. That, or she was mentally cataloging corpses. There would be forms to file, letters to write home, posthumous awards to be pinned to empty shrouds. Unlike Kinoc, she did not seem the sort to delegate those duties.

"I should apologize," he said.

"Excuse me, sir?"


"Oh. Phllltt. Don't even." She waved a hand dismissively. "We're soldiers, sir. We know missions may fail. I just wish I hadn't abandoned my troops like this. They probably think I'm dead, too." Fingernails dug into her knee, and she took another drink, longer than the first. "At least the general's there to look after 'em."

Another story dangled in the gaps between her words, tied off with a tourniquet labeled To Be Continued and a question mark. An old story, as old as war itself, which the temples had been trying to hush ever since Lady Yocun and Lilith had turned their bond into another heretic summoner's triumph. Auron wondered if Maechen included their tale in his longwinded ramblings.

"There is one thing, sir," Elma said. "Would you mind a nosy question?"

"Go ahead." Tidus had mellowed him. Not that he promised answers.

"Thank you, sir." Elma laid down a screen of words while she collected her thoughts. "It's funny. I used to be the go-to officer for the cadets, the night before their first battle. They'd call me 'Mom' behind my back. You know, those islander kids...never handled anything more dangerous than a blitzball before. And I am." She snorted. "So, anyway. How did you keep going, after you found out Yevon was a flat-out lie?"

"It was...difficult." Particularly the getting-killed part.

"No kidding." She gave him a look that was two parts admiration, one part exasperation. "Come to think of it, Yevon stabbed you in the back coming and going on Lord Braska's pilgrimage, didn't it?"

"You could put it that way."

"Ugh." She shivered. The tank top and cargo pants Rikku had given her were no protection against the chill seeping through glass. She took another sip and scooted away from the wall. "The Four Maesters tried so hard to restore our faith in Yevon, after Lord Mika's passing. Now..."

Auron leaned forward, suddenly alert. "How did he die?"

"Who? Oh, Lord Mika." She gave a tight, mirthless grin. "Yeah. Sometimes I wonder about that, too. The official word was that he died in his private chapel, praying for peace, but I think he committed suicide. When Lord Isaaru got back from Mt. Gagazet with news of the Ronso massacre, there was rioting in the streets. Monks firing on civilians, Crusaders fighting with warrior monks, priests holed up in the temple refusing sanctuary to wasn't exactly Yevon's finest hour. The shame was probably too much for him."

Auron stifled a snort. Elma was probably not the best person to ask. She had been one of the rank-and-file, ignorant of the true scale of corruption at the top.

"So Lucil got recalled to St. Bevelle to help sort out the mess. I thought we were gonna be executed for treason like poor O'aka. She and I had gone to protect the rebels in Besaid after the order came down to kill Lady Yuna." She smiled crookedly. "We didn't know what to do, sir, but we couldn't do that."

"Thanks." Another irony: Lulu had wiped out the one village that had defied Yevon for Yuna's sake.

Auron made a few mental notes on this story's discrepancies with Isaaru's and Pacce's accounts. It might have no bearing on Spira's current crop of problems, but clearly, someone was being less than forthcoming about the manner of Mika's "death." He needed to make sure they were actually lying, and not merely mistaken.

"So, anyway." Elma pressed her fingertips against her forehead, massaging in small circles. "I don't know what I'm going to tell my troops. 'Sure, go ahead, use forbidden machina...all that Yevon stuff was only hazing.' Like when they make recruits eat gysahl greens until they throw up."

"What did you tell your cadets before battle?" Auron said. "The teachings, or lessons based on your own experience?"

"Oh." Elma pondered. "Both, really. But more the latter, come to think of it."

"The church wanted you to forget that 'teachings' are only lessons, a manual written by priests. The true test comes on the battlefield. Keep what works, discard the rest."

"Hmm." She mulled this over. "I think that works. Thank you, sir."

He nodded, sinking back behind his collar.

Elma took a final swig, capped the jug and pushed it back across the floor to him. Trying not to look down, she stood carefully and moved towards the doors, flinching as they slid open. There she hesitated. "Er. If you don't mind answering, sir, what did you keep?"

There it was: the only answer that really mattered, the phylactery that kept fiend's madness at bay.


Auron would have left it at that. However, there might be grim tidings waiting for them in Bevelle. Better for her to face that battle now. "To friends. And to the fallen."

She stiffened. It might have been kinder to remind her of unspoken fears while she was still holding the jug. "I...I think I can manage that, sir."


The woman drew herself erect and clenched a fist over her heart in a salute. "Goodnight, sir. Get some rest."

Three ships cut through Spira's sky, steered by a madman, a goddess, and no pilot at all.

Auron did not sleep.

Next Chapter: Incoming

Author's Notes

(10/18) Reality in Fiction: When this chapter was posted, supporters of CA Prop 8 (banning same-sex marriage) were blanketing the airwaves with homophobic ads. The ban passed 5 months later. hits counter

Date: 2009-06-04 04:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Aaah. Angst!

Lovely foreshadowing, character-establishing angst. This chapter is more dynamic than just that, though -- the poetic imaginings of Lulu's aeon, her in-battle flirting, more threads appearing at the frayed hem.

Elma -- mom, awwh. I love their interaction -- surprisingly at ease with each other, two old soldiers.

He's all but rattling apart, but still the focus and clarity of mind! Love it.

Date: 2009-06-04 07:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Excellent! You churn out new chapters with ruthless efficiency, and the quality is not compromised at all. You're a complete natural.

Elmaaaa~ XD

Date: 2009-07-04 09:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Your prose is so poetic. Sometimes, it makes me swoon: Somewhere beyond sight, Lulu (who had been another precipice) was flying blind in a cavernous belly of bone and rot and darkness. Could the Lady see stars from her vile cocoon? Ahhh the metaphors.

How oblivious am I? I never thought of the Venus and Mars sigils. It's nice when you point out things like this.

How very evocative and sad. As I said before, you are so good with loss. I like the stark image as the reminder: Lulu in that irrevocable moment of despair, sheathed in ice and metal and a tree of lightning six hundred feet high, towering over a Yuna-sized shadow painted onto scorched bedrock.

I really enjoy the advice Auron gives to Elma. It's nice to see that even though he's fraying at the seams, you've still let him keep his pride and nobility of character.

This is just me being uncertain: "Most likely, Isaaru was suffering from the effects of having aeons torn from him piece by piece. It was a strain that Auron knew all too well." You're not referring to Yuna 'killing' each aeon before going for Yu Yevon, right? That's what comes to my mind. There's probably some other event you're referring to. I just can't think of anything off the top of my head. Oh, does Yunalesca takes the other aeons away before the Final Summons?

Date: 2009-07-05 12:53 am (UTC)
ext_79737: (What's Your SIgn?)
From: [identity profile]
Re: Isaaru and his aeons -- rather like the spinach in my garden right now, that plot-thread has been overgrown and neglected because of so many other plot threads sprouting and burgeoning.

Lulu has been making a pilgrimage to destroy or block access to all the aeons. In the early chapters I made it more explicit that Isaaru was feeling some kind of effect from having his aeons destroyed: he was visibly tired, strained. But the strain of all the sendings he had to perform in the early chapters tended to mask the cause.

And now, unknown to Auron, Isaaru has filled the "gap in his heart" left by the three aeons he's lost with Anima/Erinyes. Yet another thread I need to hang onto!

Venus/Mars has been a subtext in my writing since I first started writing Lulu/Auron. I doubt Squaresoft intended the two characters to be linked as I have done, but on the other hand they did give Tidus the Sun and Yuna the Moon!

Date: 2009-07-05 01:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
Ah, it makes perfect sense. I was overthinking things. I thought I might have been. I liked the way you described Anima as well, by the way. She is certainly the most strange and disturbing aeon in the game, in my opinion.

Date: 2009-08-30 01:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile]
*mutters at LJ for eating her first comment*

I really liked the ending on this one and Elma certainly needed a chat after the whole realization of the truth that only Auron could give. It made me think a little like Wakka's moment of truth but Elma was a bit more rational and intelligent about it... not to mention a little depressed.

O'aka?!?!?!?! You can't kill Lt. Broccoli!!!

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