ext_51168 ([identity profile] muggy-mountain.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] auronlu 2009-11-01 03:43 am (UTC)

Finally, I'm here! Took me long enough.

This is an impressive multi-character scene -- everybody sounds precisely like themselves, even the characters with less of a voice in the original series. There's nothing clunky or sloggy about this -- the narrative keeps up, much is revealed, and the characters are slowly catching up, while Lulu's practically flailing and hopping around.

I like how neatly this bookends the original Machina war -- another experimental weapon, the destruction of the Fayth rather than the creation of them. Very tidy. Polished.

Yay!

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