ext_51168 ([identity profile] muggy-mountain.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] auronlu 2009-09-24 07:43 pm (UTC)

Lulu's really giving them a time, eh?

Your hallucination imagery works really well here -- powerful, seamless, evocative, and uncanny. Zuke! You really are bringing back the whole cast, hah. I'm a little confused about what happened to Auron near the end of the scene -- was Zuke forced to thundaga, or did he just...tip over?

Isaaru, Pacce. They're in for a world of grief. I'd imagine it's not particularly common for three brothers to survive so long together relatively unscathed in Spira. And now...poor dudes.

Nice subtle bit of Paine and Nooj's relationship, too.

And the Elma and Lucil reunion, finally! Is Elma going to take a more background role now? I'll miss her, hah. But it's a good and comfortable place to leave her.

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