Date: 2008-11-25 03:10 am (UTC)
ext_79737: (Auron2)
I should have broken this into two chapters, but I've promised [ profile] vandavere over and over that the Wakka chapter was just 2-3 chapters away for far too long. I sad last week that he'd be in chapter 16.

It works, anyway. Anyone who's still reading at this point will not give up because it's long, as long as I get back down to 1600 or so words again after this. I've been creeping up into the 2200-2500 range again.

I'm so glad you love this. I've been waiting so long to write this part. Lulu's words about why she's destroying the temples -- that speech is almost the first thing I wrote of this story after I decided to expand it from the original [ profile] pyreflies oneshot. But notice Lulu's final words. She's still holding something back, still resorting to half-truths.

I'm boggling. Apart from Lulu's "I destroyed the temples" speech, everything came out in a continuous stream last night between about 7 and 10PM.

I should also note that I've been reading large chunks of [ profile] logistika_nyx's pieces lately to help shake me out of the same old, same old. Her writing is baroque, yet brilliant. I read her to warm up, then start writing, and the words flow.
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