Date: 2008-11-25 02:24 am (UTC)
kjashjdsad

First: excellent chapter. Lonnnng chapter, but I think it's the best one yet. Rich, varied and exciting.

The aulu stuff is heart-pingingly nice, but the garden symbolism is even better. The salty white roses, the chains --The more I yield to him, the fewer the chains, gah. Her destroying the temples for him, for all of them. There was a set-up I didn't see, and it works wonderfully.

The cactus bit is funny, a nice break in a piece like this.

And Wakka! And Rikku. I've always loved them together myself. What a knuckle-biting place to end, hah.
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