Date: 2008-06-25 03:38 am (UTC)
Oh, this was a beautiful chapter.

I'm really enjoying seeing you develop these minor characters. Pacce is especially darling and entirely realistic in his youth. He reminds me a bit of Tidus, but only just --your Pacce's quite a bit less reckless, it seems.

The imagery at the end is stunning and vivid. It juxtaposes poetry and excitement, something that's not done much these days, particularly in fanfic. Chapter five now!
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