Date: 2008-07-13 03:33 pm (UTC)
Guh. This is a wonderful beginning. I love the way you've set up this Sin as a whole new entity. That hadn't occurred to me, but it's brilliant.

Your sailors, whether NPCs or OCs are beautifully drawn and Isaaru as Grand Maester, how fitting.

I like the way you've written about the aeons here a great deal. First of all their names are convincing. I don't know if you invented them or if they are the names of other gods (I believe you have an amazing grounding in mythology and all so it wouldn't surprise me). But even more impressive is the way you give them character. I am delighted that the Besaid aeon won't fight Sin because she has an affinity for the island, as evidenced also by the way she patrols near it. I also love Isaaru's hesitation to summon a fire aeon on a ship.

You've made this world seem so real. Now I definitely have to read more.
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