Date: 2007-12-16 11:28 am (UTC)
Ah, brilliant!

Is this a rewrite of the earlier story? I'm really liking this as a multi-chapter and looking forward to the next installment. As always, your scenes are so lush and real. I especially like the individual voices of the deckhands and your descriptions of the battle. The Sin idol was a brilliant and intriguing touch, and you end your chapter with such a compelling stroke, agh!

I'm glad to see your muse has wandered back this way again.
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