Date: 2008-07-18 02:55 am (UTC)
I love how many questions this chapter raises. You're carving out something of a mystery for us. Mysteries, of course, hook me like nothing else. Needless to say, I was quite happy to see this up this morning. :D

Again, your world-building is deft and grounding without being bogged down in overmuch detail. Auron's observation on his grasp of time both raises a question and settles one, with a dash of (I'm guessing) foreshadow. The timing of the 14 year old potions make me wonder who this summoner was and if we met her in the games.

Of course, the end is absolutely tantalizing and I wish your muses godspeed in the next chapter...!

I think this one may replace Resurrection 3 as my favorite of your multi-chapters. :)
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